18.7 Final Curtain
The garage is a bloody diorama, a flood of theater light casting police into shadows.Tags number significant spots. Cameras record. One officer opens the kitchen door. A dachshund pins back its ears,...
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no camma after dachshund, (you might have previously had "its ears pinned back", which would need the comma) otherwise quite perfect construction. I have always loved dioramas, and here it's used to...
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